• smb@lemmy.ml
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    2 days ago

    clean up your writing.

    sorry if i missspell words of have bad grammatics, english is not my native language and just “reading” what exists in the internet does not help either… would you please help me what you meant by “clean up” exactly so i can improve?

    • Jax@sh.itjust.works
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      2 days ago

      For example

      weirdocrappydictatorlike

      Is probably better structured as

      weirdo-crappy-dictatoresque

      That being said, my biggest problem with what you wrote is that I have no idea what you’re trying to say. I could make my best guess, but I’d almost certainly be wrong. It’s hard to edit a message that you don’t really understand the meaning of/ motivation behind.

      Edit: also, ‘decisions’ and ‘arbitration’