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  • qarbone@lemmy.worldto196@lemmy.blahaj.zoneTriangle rule
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    11 days ago

    That is the standard of the love triangle. The two love rivals have to be friends with, or at least know, each other or else there is no tension between them for their love of the 2nd party. Or else every person talking to multiple people on dating apps is in a love n-gon. And love should never intersext with n-gons.






  • qarbone@lemmy.worldtoLemmy Shitpost@lemmy.worldMeatspin
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    16 days ago

    This was the centrifuge through which they distilled the kids worth giving a shit about.

    Yes, I know centrifuges don’t distill. No, I will not be making any modifications. And, if you asked in your heart, you were probably the chaff spun aside by the Iron Dais of Judgment.





  • My understanding of poetry is that the level you’re describing is for decent poems and then excellent ones are doing interesting things technically while being as emotionally engaging.

    I’ll admit I was likely reading too deeply into the comments but I thought people were considering this poem excellent when it’s not at the level I described.